Excellent execution. Very nicely done. Good blend of visual effects, and in some instances i was pleasantly suprised as to the coordination of the actual effects with the happenings (ie Plane shooting somehting, it blows up).
For a first scenario, extremley great job. If this is indeed your first try at the Scn Editor, i give you a standing Ovation.
You could really grow into soemthing from this.
Lots of Luck, look forward to your next scn.
I love the bit where you set the lighitng to sunset, and the camera scrolled across a fogged of terain containg mountains. Loooked really effetive.