Not bad man...
But, Your edit is like out from story real battle on Helms deep.
Why there's someone name Iqbal???
I suggest you Make all Story Instruction in English Language. Because, they doesn't know Indonesian Language.
But, it's is Good Scenario even you just change it.
(Please make your own scenario in future)
Posted on 01/16/10 @ 01:51 AM
you are from indonesia knight? i'm from the philippines! (not that i know bahasa, it's just good to see a fellow SouthEast Asian here).
yup, brutal is correct. and of course, we'll be much more happy if you'll submit one of your own scens in the future.
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Posted on 01/16/10 @ 07:22 AM
im sorry man , it just a bad scen. i'll make "starship troopers" in my next scen . . .. . ..
Posted on 01/19/10 @ 06:33 AM
based on Robert Heinlein's novel? Or from the movie adaptation?